After carrying out a peer review of my experimentation and project so far I have been able to gather and workshop feedback with my peers in order to explain and expand upon my project so far. Throughout the peer review, I explained my experimentation and the write ups that I had put together, my peers explained how my experimentation was thorough and explained in my write up well, I was able to compare and contrast my sources making my experimentation more in-depth and relevant to my outcome. They also explained how they liked that I linked the sources I used as well as my practical experimentation in video form, in addition to this, I was made clear that my experimentation was linked to my project very well and they could see in my write up why I chose the experimentation and also how I am going to use it in order to further my project. 

 

In terms of improvements, the group did not explicitly recommend any improvements for my work so far, however, I have been able to construct my own improvements, for example I feel that in order to strengthen my project and experimentation further I will need to research and experiment with more techniques to evidence on-going research. Helping to not only improve my outcome but also to push my grade further.